Dear Neighbour,
I am writing this letter to let you know that I'm really disappointed by the behavior of your son.
Let me explain you the situation, I was quite okay with the fact that you and family share a contemporary life style. However, we are facing complications while we go to sleep. Because you're son is playing booming music every night. At the same time, we are suspecting a drastic smell coming from your house. Due to these issues I personally not able to sleep and not able to concentrate on my work because of lack of sleep.
We are facing this issue from past couple of weeks.For an Example, Your son comes with plenty of his friends screaming every late night with alcohols. And I believe that they do not respect the society members who must be sleeping that time.
Although, I really respect your approach towards life and understand your culture. However, I would recommend that please guide your son to have such kind of parties in a club instead at home. And he can drink alcohol in the society bar. So that we all can help to make a better society instead a spoiled one.
I hope that you will consider this letter in a positive manner!
Many Thanks,
Shahin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...riting this letter to let you know that Im really disappointed by the behavior of ...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ing complications while we go to sleep. Because youre son is playing booming music ever...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...lications while we go to sleep. Because youre son is playing booming music every nigh...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...ng this issue from past couple of weeks.For an Example, Your son comes with plenty ...
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Line 9, column 239, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e can drink alcohol in the society bar. So that we all can help to make a better societ...
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Line 11, column 43, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive manner" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...hope that you will consider this letter in a positive manner! Many Thanks, Shahin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so, while, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61214953271 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4182728335 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635514018692 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1084485184 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9230769231 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4615384615 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176457880615 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587667029954 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555069066501 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105679445043 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343636095122 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.