Retirement age is a hot and controversial topic in our country. As per Labor's law approved by supreme court, Maximum limit of retirement age is 60 years which is applies on kind of government jobs traditionally. However , I strongly disagree to the constitution of India.
In my opinion, there are labours such as plumbers, workers on the road, bridges and whoever allocated on the fields should get an early retirement. Certainly, there are advantages releasing them on early age which will benefit the government and to the employee. For an example, Government can replace those workers by an enthusiastic young workers which will help to generate more revenue to the country. At the same time the old workers will receive their pension amount and might recommend their served position to their friends and family via verbal communication or social media etc. Because, they have received a pleasant work environment by the organisation.
Having said that, there are couple of jobs in all over the world which require more number of experience. Therefore, those employees such as Teachers, Doctors, Engineers, Business Managers, Scientists etc, should be retire after 60 or 65 years. Because, their experiences and suggestions lead to grow our country and build an outstanding generations. The efforts they made towards their jobs are more likely a brain booster tasks instead a physical tasks which is highly recommended and one can easily perform the task without any difficulties. We can create a great culture If, we approach our Nation to write a better retirement policy in their law.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Line 3, column 342, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'worker'?
Suggestion: worker
... those workers by an enthusiastic young workers which will help to generate more revenu...
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Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'retired'?
Suggestion: retired
...ess Managers, Scientists etc, should be retire after 60 or 65 years. Because, their ex...
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Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'generation'?
Suggestion: generation
...ow our country and build an outstanding generations. The efforts they made towards their jo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, thus, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20542635659 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87647638036 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643410852713 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1964112738 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.307692308 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225006478524 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749897206555 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423645536528 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15037984352 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449205605655 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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