Dear Sir/Madam,
I, Diva, from Hyderabad writing this letter to seek your assistance regarding the advertisement which was published in The Times Newspaper, International editorial page on 18th September 2019. It was mentioned that your organization was looking forward to a volunteer to teach the English language in London, UK.
In detail, I am shifting to London on 4th October 2019 to pursue Ph. D in English literature from Birmingham University. As my college hours are from 9.30 am – 2.30 pm, I would be free to teach voluntarily to the students.
I have completed a master’s degree in English from Indiana University in 2016, and since then started to work as an English teacher at St. Ann’s High school. As I know how to behave with children, I am confident that my skills could be useful if I join in your community to help the poor students learn the English language.
I have attached my resume along with this email, please let me know your interest if I am eligible to join in your organization for any assistance.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Diva Robert
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96315789474 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92879958959 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.680390495 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.777777778 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183155558291 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747254974659 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594715645438 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10581081404 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640740521471 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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