Dear Sir/Madam,
I, Divya, am writing this letter in regard to gather information about the French language course in your esteemed institution, UNACADEMY. I heard about your teaching methodology and tactics from one of my best friends, who was once your student, Daisy.
In detail, I work as an international conference executive and due to my office works, I need to travel to various countries to meet delegates and confirm our projects. In the month of August, I need to fly to France to get our MoU signed by the conference committee members, and they communicate with me in French only. That is why I am intrigued to procure the communication skills of this language.
However, it would be generous if you could email me in detail about the course study materials, duration, and fee structure so that I can make the necessary arrangements. Moreover, could you please let me know how would I contact you if I have queries, either by email or social networks like WhatsApp or twitter?
I look forward to joining the classes at the earliest.
Yours sincerely,
Divyasree
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 11, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
Dear Sir/Madam, I, Divya, am writing this letter in regard to gather...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91256830601 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88114462607 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68306010929 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.5254018873 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8888888889 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186430722502 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616688177186 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515092298419 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871511947975 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653784539283 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.