Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance.
The issue raises a controversy <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-EDFF5363EA1504478F69305541414A8F" data-pwa-rule-id="WHETHER" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Consider shortening this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'." data-pwa-suggestions="whether" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="whether or not" class="pwa-mark">whether or not</pwa> it is
necessary to determine <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-669AA7EB9513B7B7500F46180D068061" data-pwa-rule-id="DET_CG_2" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible missing determiner" data-pwa-suggestions="a teacher~the teacher" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="teacher" class="pwa-mark">teacher</pwa>'s salaries based on their student's
<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-4769A62F1750AE731F3B21A8BC0D203F" data-pwa-rule-id="MISSING_CAP_START" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Missing capitalization at the start of a sentence" data-pwa-suggestions="Acedemic" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="acedemic" class="pwa-mark">acedemic</pwa> performance. Each side has <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-4B9D06E43F0B694E38C852B8E1BD7237" data-pwa-rule-id="IT_IS" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible confused word" data-pwa-suggestions="its" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="it's" class="pwa-mark">it's</pwa> strength and weakness.
Although <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-AC203EC39B51C6B208215D3D38534242" data-pwa-rule-id="I_LOWERCASE" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible confused word" data-pwa-suggestions="I" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="i" class="pwa-mark">i</pwa> agree with the issue, but there are some reasons
<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-F808962E0B9BF96E7346CA3C437BDA0D" data-pwa-rule-id="LONG_INTRO" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="When a sentence starts with a prepositional phrase, it should contain a comma." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="for" class="pwa-mark">for</pwa> which <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-D7BCC504A34BD759428C5F6E08B93771" data-pwa-rule-id="DET_CG_2" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible missing determiner" data-pwa-suggestions="a teacher~the teacher" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="teacher" class="pwa-mark">teacher</pwa>'s salaries should not <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-0AB98326E6D250C2118816AFBDE7FCD4" data-pwa-rule-id="DID_BASEFORM" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="The verb 'should' requires base form of the verb: 'base'" data-pwa-suggestions="base" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="based" class="pwa-mark">based</pwa> on their student's
performance.
First<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-80C0EC36597BBEAEFC4FF6FCC88449FD" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2523" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word=" of all" class="pwa-mark"> of all</pwa>, teacher will become <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-435CB28FF6328D3B218B5DEF797179E6" data-pwa-rule-id="DET_CG_2" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible missing determiner" data-pwa-suggestions="a better~the better" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="better" class="pwa-mark">better</pwa> teacher if their salaries are
<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-D87A9230B2D0C34BF4E1AB37D8690754" data-pwa-rule-id="MISSING_CAP_START" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Missing capitalization at the start of a sentence" data-pwa-suggestions="Based" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="based" class="pwa-mark">based</pwa> on their performance. If a student gets <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-85FD0AEE124D9662DEBD080D54BE2FDF" data-pwa-rule-id="DET_CG_2" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible missing determiner" data-pwa-suggestions="a low~the low" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="low" class="pwa-mark">low</pwa> grade and the
<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-B68A7358088023ECDECF23648859659C" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="It reduces salary of respective teacher~They reduce salary of respective teacher~I reduce salary of respective teacher" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="salary of respective teacher is reduced" class="pwa-mark">salary of respective teacher </pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-B68A7358088023ECDECF23648859659C" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="It reduces salary of respective teacher~They reduce salary of respective teacher~I reduce salary of respective teacher" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="salary of respective teacher is reduced" class="pwa-mark">is reduced</pwa>, then <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-F7827991E0ED0D59357EDC9DDEBA6C3C" data-pwa-rule-id="DET_CG_2" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible missing determiner" data-pwa-suggestions="a teacher~the teacher" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="teacher" class="pwa-mark">teacher</pwa> will be more
<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-07BEF76E3102417AF56C43201B290D9E" data-pwa-rule-id="MISSING_CAP_START" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Missing capitalization at the start of a sentence" data-pwa-suggestions="Attentive" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="attentive" class="pwa-mark">attentive</pwa> in preparing their course material. Also, teacher might be
<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-D6200F7B4CC8D6D069A36374B9CF6351" data-pwa-rule-id="MISSING_CAP_START" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Missing capitalization at the start of a sentence" data-pwa-suggestions="Started" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="started" class="pwa-mark">started</pwa> personal care of this student. Besides, <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-E25ADA1D1FAA8D1D8488E532F613BF8D" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="I will start him~we will start him~it will start him~they will start him" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="he will be started" class="pwa-mark">he </pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-E25ADA1D1FAA8D1D8488E532F613BF8D" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="I will start him~we will start him~it will start him~they will start him" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="he will be started" class="pwa-mark">will be started</pwa>
to motivate <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-BF15B6D957ED4599BAD9CFC1F0A52195" data-pwa-rule-id="DET_CG_2" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible missing determiner" data-pwa-suggestions="a student~the student" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="student" class="pwa-mark">student</pwa> to be more attentive.
<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-6126EA44D047EFF2113BBD6ABE467621" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_407" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: Teacher" data-pwa-suggestions="Teacher" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="On the contrary, teacher" class="pwa-mark">On the contrary, teacher</pwa> can not be accused for the low grade of
<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-53C8529456B0ED3E54E663CA749BC6A8" data-pwa-rule-id="MISSING_CAP_START" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Missing capitalization at the start of a sentence" data-pwa-suggestions="Their" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="their" class="pwa-mark">their</pwa> students. Recently, in Bangladesh such kind of <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-2D77C0CBD08FD9C9D0F5FB65436347E2" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: porgramm" data-pwa-suggestions="programs~program~programmes~programme~Pergamum" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="porgramm" class="pwa-mark">porgramm</pwa> is
implemented in a school to judge <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-766897F51A9AE4B411C735120ED2B2E9" data-pwa-rule-id="DET_CG_2" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible missing determiner" data-pwa-suggestions="a teacher~the teacher" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="teacher" class="pwa-mark">teacher</pwa>'s attentiveness in
<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-E3C6A1A9A8B8131C29349AEC55C68237" data-pwa-rule-id="MISSING_CAP_START" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Missing capitalization at the start of a sentence" data-pwa-suggestions="Their" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="their" class="pwa-mark">their</pwa> work. Despite of hard and soul <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-E4202F2E03062983482C06123CAFF091" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: tring" data-pwa-suggestions="thing~string~ring~tiring~tying" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="tring" class="pwa-mark">tring</pwa> of <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-E718E05CE7B017AB9C4EABCFE8AD38C7" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: techer" data-pwa-suggestions="teacher~tether" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="techer" class="pwa-mark">techer</pwa>, letter mark
<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-DD56AFD40A3AA7B25F52EC241A093D62" data-pwa-rule-id="MISSING_CAP_START" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Missing capitalization at the start of a sentence" data-pwa-suggestions="Getting" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="getting" class="pwa-mark">getting</pwa> rate is only thirty percent. <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-0DBC1CC36777EFA77303CC4FB3BFE35F" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_814" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: If" data-pwa-suggestions="If" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="Furthermore, if" class="pwa-mark">Furthermore, if</pwa> the students
are not self motivated, then good grade can not <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-F997E360A05848FB69EE6EDCB077E6DB" data-pwa-rule-id="DID_BASEFORM" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="The verb 'can' requires base form of the verb: 'expect'" data-pwa-suggestions="expect" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="expected" class="pwa-mark">expected</pwa>.
Finally, if teacher <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-0C64EADCBA5DEF06840F41A9458B1A14" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: honorariu" data-pwa-suggestions="honorarium~honoraria" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="honorariu" class="pwa-mark">honorariu</pwa> <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-37C42B904D54E2EFD3D3FF8DF163B0CD" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: wil" data-pwa-suggestions="will~win~oil~wit~wilt" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="wil" class="pwa-mark">wil</pwa> more for great performance of their
student, then they will more motivated than who are not gain this allowance.
Most of the schools pay teacher based on their seniority. Because of this
when teachers become old as well *** they <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-E8E9F3F4D90F07E43D422B5129C6C6F4" data-pwa-rule-id="CRFSR_LOSS_39" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible confused word" data-pwa-suggestions="lose" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="loss" class="pwa-mark">loss</pwa> <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-2B3E632204C4DD7F4D6029D89B19EF4B" data-pwa-rule-id="CRFSR_THIR_17" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible confused word" data-pwa-suggestions="their" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="thir" class="pwa-mark">thir</pwa> mental and physical energy and
their teaching activity gradually decrease.
On the whole, teacher should receive their honorarium based on their
<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-C06A2475AC8EB19465B6A432AB53E13B" data-pwa-rule-id="MISSING_CAP_START" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Missing capitalization at the start of a sentence" data-pwa-suggestions="Student" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="student" class="pwa-mark">student</pwa> performance. When they pay for their student's performance,
<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-071D408C2A39694888090F25940FF650" data-pwa-rule-id="MISSING_CAP_START" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Missing capitalization at the start of a sentence" data-pwa-suggestions="They" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="they" class="pwa-mark">they</pwa> will motivate to take care of their students properly.<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-6A1AAB561C408BBC8D0C3E34858949C5" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_542" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word=" Nevertheless," class="pwa-mark"> Nevertheless,</pwa>
sometimes teacher educational background, teaching <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-83C5D4F4A22A93AB2D3C8ABAE47A5A7C" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: expreience" data-pwa-suggestions="experience" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="expreience" class="pwa-mark">expreience</pwa>, <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-72CE7F63C33219F8073AF3BE16047921" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: seniorty" data-pwa-suggestions="sand~seniority~sound~Sunday~Sandy" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="seniorty" class="pwa-mark">seniorty</pwa> should
consider <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-B2719201273D154B87CCDE1A923B4971" data-pwa-rule-id="GR_106" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Use the gerund here" data-pwa-suggestions="determining" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="to determine" class="pwa-mark">to </pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-B2719201273D154B87CCDE1A923B4971" data-pwa-rule-id="GR_106" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Use the gerund here" data-pwa-suggestions="determining" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="to determine" class="pwa-mark">determine</pwa> <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-FB8861888C5DE2742421FD05D8961577" data-pwa-rule-id="DET_CG_2" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible missing determiner" data-pwa-suggestions="a teacher~the teacher" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="teacher" class="pwa-mark">teacher</pwa>'s honorarium.
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- "Although many people think that the luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life areentirely harmless, they in fact, prevent people from developing into truly strong andindependent individuals." 58
- "Many of the world's lesser-known languages are being lost as fewer and fewer people speak them. The governments of countries in which these languages are spoken should act to prevent such languages from becoming extinct." 66
- Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance. 50
- Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance. 16
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans tothink for themselves will surely deteriorate. 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
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The issue raises a controversy
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...or not' class='pwa-mark'>whether or not it is necessary to determine <...> ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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...wa-mark'>whether or not it is necessary to determine
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...th the issue, but there are some reasons
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...k'>based on their students performance. First
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...s;pwa-mark'>low grade and the
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...pos;pwa-mark'>will be started to motivate
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... can not be accused for the low grade of
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...os; class='pwa-mark'>wil more for great performance of their s...
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...hir mental and physical energy and their teaching activity gradually decrea...
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... receive their honorarium based on their
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...;pwa-mark'>seniorty should consider
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, well, kind of, on the contrary, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 28.0 12.4196629213 225% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 58.0 33.0505617978 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 16956.0 2235.4752809 758% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 934.0 442.535393258 211% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 18.1541755889 5.05705443957 359% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 5.52823783677 4.55969084622 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 17.4493257242 2.79657885939 624% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 381.0 215.323595506 177% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.407922912206 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 4377.6 704.065955056 622% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 4.7 1.59117977528 295% => Avg_syllables_per_word is high.
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 44.0 23.0359550562 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 583.261542716 60.3974514979 966% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 807.428571429 118.986275619 679% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.4761904762 23.4991977007 189% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 27.0 4.97078651685 543% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0203392340742 0.243740707755 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0263750488819 0.0831039109588 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402054334057 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0352853647408 0.150359130593 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606692535671 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 86.3 14.1392134831 610% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -235.44 48.8420337079 -482% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 28.0 7.92365168539 353% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 57.0 12.1743820225 468% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 88.88 12.1639044944 731% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.6 8.38706741573 126% => OK
difficult_words: 283.0 100.480337079 282% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 24.0 11.8971910112 202% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 11.2143820225 175% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 11.7820224719 238% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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