The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The maps demonstrate the center of a small town, namely Islip at the present and how this place will be changed in the future.
It is obvious from the maps that there will be a number of innovations in this area such as the construction of the bus station and the new housing.
Presently, in the south of the town, there is a large park, a school and two areas of housing, but follow the planed development, the park will be narrowed, the school will be still remained and then a dual carriageway will be constructed directly through the school and the park in order to connect these places. Moreover, a part of the housing located near the shop will become smaller and lead to the erection of a new housing.
As we can see on the design, in the north of the town, the countryside will disappear and the shops beside the countryside will be turned down to make a way for bus station, shopping center, car park and new housing. Additionally, in the middle of the town, the main road will be expanded and converted into the pedestrians only. But the shop in the south of the main road will not be demolished or converted as the other one. One more noticed point that all new places will be connected by the dual carriageway so that people can access to these places easily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so, still, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 32.9175257732 27% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45106382979 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49970210991 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506382978723 0.622605031667 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 7.0 0.824742268041 849% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.6949779824 44.8134815571 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.75 76.5299724578 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.375 16.8248392259 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0774955650249 0.216113520407 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415774587716 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500252095773 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0682613343476 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054665809789 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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