International community must act immediately to ensure all nations to reduce their
consumption of fossil fuels e.g. gas and oil. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The greatest threat of humanity on the earth is global warming caused by human's actions. I strongly believe that nations in the world should closely coordinate to drastically lessen the consumption of fossil energy since population in a country influences others and no nation will take the initiative due to the economic impacts of such measures. i am in favor of this standpoint that all nations should act immediately to conserve our planet,
On the one hand, it is time that every nation should cooperate with many global companies to tackle the global environmental concerns altogether . This is simply because serious difficulties of ecological degradation and some populations are generated by such powers which emit harmful chemical and co2 gases n and chemicals are noticeably as harmful gases and chemicals are trapped in the air. The main reason is that many citizens in the world highly rely on energy resources such as oil and gases . Besides , as many commuters or employees tend to make use of private vehicles in metropolitan cities consistently, it seems to be difficult for them not to use fossil fuels everyday . And the problem is if all enterprises can replace fossil fuel by renewable energy that will be top-notch for our planet. On the other hand, this is an era of competition in which all nations compete to produce goods at low price. Since reducing dependence on crude oil will entail huge investments in alternative sources and this will increase the price of manufactured goods. That will make them lose their competitive edge in the trade market . From what i have been revealing, i absolutely agree with the idea that all countries in the world need to work with a variety of international communities to sort out the environmental destruction by not taking the advantage of oil or other gases anymore.
In conclusion, human's future is at state and the price of not acting is too high. I reckon all countries must cooperate and impose strict reduction targets on all countries
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, i reckon, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01194029851 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8552310398 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570149253731 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.8228425368 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.153846154 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7692307692 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19122441896 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574895566537 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425263578111 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121219603209 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167577130585 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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