Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
In the modern world with an expeditious pace of globalization , people are believed to have decisions excessively. I strongly reckon that it is true because our world more and more develops, that means all things upgrade too, and our needs are not an exception. that is why we want to have more choices to find suitable ones.
On the one hand, too many selections bring us some advantages. First of all, it is easy for us to buy a product with a wide range of colors, types, costs and qualities. For instance, if you want to buy a smartphone, you will have a lot of decisions about type of phone, colors, prices. secondly, enterprise can increase the economy since they understand customer's requirements,from that they produce devices, goods with a various way,from lower to upper price, and they will collect a huge number of money. Last but not least, more choices more opportunities we receive. For example, when we ready to finish high school , we have to find a reasonable university, if you found it, you study hard and after that you can achieve the success and you will have a good job in future. Nevertheless, more selections can lead us to more troubles.
On the other hand,there are still many disadvantages when we have inordinate options. Firstly, we can be tangled, from the example i mentioned in the above paragraph, we have to find a reasonable university or another purposes , if we choose wrong direction, we can face lots of difficulties and our future may be influenced. secondly, it might be harmful for us if we do not consider goods carefully. Unless we find and research about the goods cautiously, we will be fooled and even harmful for our health. In general, costumer's demand is both cheap and quality , but it is hard for enterprises to produce the products like that, and some famous brand may be forged with lower price, this will reduce reputation and economy of real brand.
In conclusion,in all my truthfulness , when our society grow, all things grow too, so that choices also be widen to catch up the early trend to serve us. However, when we confront with a various options , we can choose wrong, so that we need to consider carefully to have the best selections for us
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77142857143 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78120733481 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52987012987 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6208364603 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.058823529 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6470588235 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8823529412 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20602880453 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736196712813 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544013525449 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12588939513 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252465892697 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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