Caring for children is very important for our society. Therefore all mothers and fathers should take childcare training course. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
There is no doubt parenting is a formidable job. To make them good human being it is very essential to improve their moral and ethnic value at the early age. Some people think parents need to get childcare training course. I concur partially with this notion. This easy intends to discuss in the following paragraphs.
To embark upon, the evidences are plenty to prove why childcare training course plays a key role in family. The mammoth recognisable fact is that in the contemporary era, nuclear family are ubiquitous which are working late hours. In such situations raising child is very difficult task. In these cases, one of the them is needs to look after their child and join such training course in which is taught how to care for their children at the early age. With the help of these courses, parents can easily understood their children properly. Thus, these kinds of training courses are much imperative for the parents in order to to care their children.
Furthermore, the another factor is linked to the joint families. In these families, there are other members who assist them to care their children. As elder are much experienced in such activities. For example, in the earlier time, only one parent was work and mother was there to supervision their children. Experience which is gained from elder people is more better which would be prove beneficial to take care their children for the parents. This helps can be get free of charge, while others trainers charge fees to train them
To contemplate, these kinds of training courses are suitable for the nuclear families, whilst joint families already have supervisor to look after their children. Such course are appropriate in order to improvements of child in the beginning stages
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'them'?
Suggestion: the; them
...difficult task. In these cases, one of the them is needs to look after their child and ...
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Line 5, column 625, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...uch imperative for the parents in order to to care their children. Furthermore, ...
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Line 9, column 149, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...who assist them to care their children. As elder are much experienced in such acti...
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Line 9, column 358, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...ce which is gained from elder people is more better which would be prove beneficial to take...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, so, thus, while, for example, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98983050847 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52009219951 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538983050847 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.4834650843 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7777777778 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3888888889 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38888888889 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177250585753 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529183256304 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535756038683 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109249759853 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361287662106 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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