Nowadays role of advertising is increasing with it great impact on people's choices. We can see many advertisements in our routine life in numerous platforms like hoardings, displays, TV, radio, internet and so on.some hold an opinion that most time it encourage people to buy the things which they do not really need. I am totally agree with the opinion but before reach any decision ot needs to be discussed.
First of all, as compare to past now people have more opportunities to come across with various advertisements for instance TV, internet, on road street etc. Moreover it is reality that there are plenty of advertisements do not depict the feature of goods. Consequently, watching these advertisements create great interest in certain goods hence we tend to consume them.
In Addition, sometimes companies use prominent people in their ads to attract public and increase the sell. For example, famous actor has played role in slimmering belt to lose weight without dieting and exercise. It tempts many people because it seems easy way and they attracted by the actor who is fit and fine.
However, we can not totally accuse the advertisements on cheating and manipulating public as they have number of pros too. For illustration, we are becoming totally aware with the product and come to know about new products which are recently come in market. Also, advertisement gives us idea about usefulness, prices and demerits of product therefore we can make proper decision to buy it.
To conclude, I lay my emphasize on the drawbacks of advertisements by considering all mentioned facts. Many times it helps us to make quick and good decision but we must consider our needs and budget therefore we can stay away from unnecessary buying of product and save our money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03040540541 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8598067759 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628378378378 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8971253632 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.357142857 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127671663895 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446998903555 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031225505452 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0695212069612 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376827531624 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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