Useful adults have never been a person who develops a sense of competition only, they should also have the capability of cooperating with others. Therefore, each factor alone can’t be responsible for their success. This essay seeks to establish that these two characteristics are equally important contributing to an useful adult.
In order to be more useful, the person should be ambitious to reach a clear goal and enjoy a great relationship with others. The former can be achieved by developing a sense of competition in children, including encouraging them to excel and never falling behind o...
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