Values and inportant factors in relationships have become a contentious topic.Being a honest is essential to maintain any relations.some people says that little laying should part of relation.But I totally agrees that everyone should being honest to others.
From out childhood we was learning to honesty is the best policy from our parents.Our parents teach to us some morals n values of life.All relationships are beased on Honesty.Firstly,being a honest gives successful professional life.some employees tells lies that thay are much qualified for taking job.they saws fake documents and degrees to get the job.aftersometime lies will be discoverd.someone says lies will be lies.Secondly,for marriage life honestly must need to maintain marriage life.Husband and wife are being honest to eachother.they should trust eachother and always tells truth to eachother.Father of indian nation mahatma gandhi believs in trust and honesty and he always work on it.
On other hand,some people salys “white lying” should be necessary to maintain relation.If truth gets hurt to others there will be lies maintain others feelings.sometime people says lies to maintain their self respect.Mother says lies to child for being child healthy.
To the summary,I opined that starting of every relationship should based on honesty.I would like to say that dont forget moral values of life and our culture
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, honestly, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 1977.66487455 60% => OK
No of words: 212.0 407.700716846 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60377358491 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50053395713 2.67179642975 131% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617924528302 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.1344086022 263% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 208.813313752 48.9658058833 426% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 297.0 100.406767564 296% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.0 20.6045352989 257% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.75 5.45110844103 252% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.5376344086 524% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209661403581 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114633012993 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559938467285 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114633012993 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559938467285 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.4 11.7677419355 267% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.22 58.1214874552 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 10.1575268817 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.09 10.9000537634 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.96 8.01818996416 137% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 10.002688172 295% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.0537634409 231% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.247311828 293% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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