You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course.
Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter
Describe the situation
Explain why you cannot continue at this time
Say what action you would like to take
Dear Sir,
My name is Ali Askar, register number A1343BC, doing final year BCA in your institution on part time basis. I am writing to you to address my concern regarding the schedule of the course.
Apart from being a student in your college, I have been working as software programmer in Walton Ch. Corporation. My working hours starts at 8am and finishes by 5pm. For the past two years, I was able to manage my employment and studies pretty well. However, the sudden changes from its previous slot of 7 pm to the current slot of 4 pm makes it difficult for me to continue the course.
I would appreciate if you could reschedule the timing at least to 6 pm so that I can resume my course as soon as possible. In addition to this, please let me know whether I can attend the sessions during the weekends.
Awaiting for your kind response.
Yours Faithfully
Ali Askar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...g final year BCA in your institution on part time basis. I am writing to you to address m...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: Awaiting; Waiting for
... the sessions during the weekends. Awaiting for your kind response. Yours Faithful...
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Line 19, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our kind response. Yours Faithfully Ali Askar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, well, apart from, at least, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 737.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63522012579 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5364242634 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.710691823899 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2292699347 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 4.34317383033 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187674433801 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626302505777 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542561545895 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101098126182 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560858950084 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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