The graph shows the number of cases of X diseases in Iran between 196 and 1995
The graph gives information about the number of people, who lived in iran, suffered from X disease over a period of 35 years from 1960 to 1995.
Overall, the number of cases of X diseases, which was constant for 5 years, rose dramatically until the mid seventies, before dropping to zero in the late 80s.
At the beginning of the period, the number of Iranian people,who infected by X disease,stood at 100 cases. this figure remained stable for 5 years, rising dramatically to 500 cases by 1975. For 5 years, this condition was stable.
From 1980 to 1990, good news was reported from this area about this problem,with figures dropping to zero. Between 1990 and 1995 no cases was seen in iran.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , who
...the period, the number of Iranian people,who infected by X disease,stood at 100 case...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , stood
...Iranian people,who infected by X disease,stood at 100 cases. this figure remained stab...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...fected by X disease,stood at 100 cases. this figure remained stable for 5 years, ris...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , with
...ported from this area about this problem,with figures dropping to zero. Between 1990 ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 595.0 965.302439024 62% => OK
No of words: 122.0 196.424390244 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87704918033 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.32345618554 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61700144955 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639344262295 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 162.9 283.868780488 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.592778023 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0 5.23603664747 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219146497232 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103534571154 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111374671063 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127579581716 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655835773259 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.