Due to the modernization and globalization people have many options to purchase things. Person tends to buy various products nowadays as compare to past. Let we discuss the possible reason for developing this type of demeanour and precaution which we can take to stop it.
To begin with, people in big cities have tendency to copy lifestyle of each other which led them to purchase unwanted items. Also they have many options like big malls and shopping centers available with different temptating skims and options for pay like credit and debit cards or installments. Many person have psychological problem when they get upset or disappointed they tend to do shopping and get the things they wanted. In this situation,they loose their control on mind so they buy commodities which they do not actually need.
Admittedly, we can try to explain them how money is important in our life. Government can organize campaigns on money management.
People must prioritize the things before they go to shopping with consideration of own financial condition. Staff of shops or malls will help the public to explain merits and demerits of products. It will prove little bit helpful.
To conclude, it is totally depend on person what they want to purchase but they must consider pros and cons . We can not force anyone in this free era.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00900900901 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72811638222 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.306575992 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4285714286 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259894382457 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787767321356 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489367715327 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127350927579 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496282475917 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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