You have recently flown to another country on a business trip. You were satisfied with the flight, but didn’t like services at the airport. Write a letter to the airport manager and say– Give your flight details.– Why were you disappointed?– Sugge

Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm writing this to let you know that I have recently flown to New York from your airport on Saturday's evening. My flight was quite good but I'm really disappointed with the services provided by the airport.

Let me explain my situation. My flight timing was 1:00 AM and I reached at the airport at 12:30. Firstly, the parking area is far from the departure gate and doesn't have enough trollies for passengers to move their luggage from parking to the departure gate. This took me half an hour to brought my luggage from the parking area to departure gate. Secondly, the food at the canteens was not hygienic.

I would like to suggest as a regular traveler, Airport management should provide more baggage trollies so the passengers could move their luggage without the hassle and food inspection should be done on regular basis. I hope you will consider my suggestion favourably.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours faithfully,

Zeeshan

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, really, second, secondly, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96951219512 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62477867966 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.245987341 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0909090909 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9090909091 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222726828893 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859228941585 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735235616903 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15493487983 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908109198237 0.0580467560999 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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