The college years are the best time in a person's life.
is it prudent to say that college years are not best days of our life? Two diverse perspective emerge while meticulously evaluating this issue. one perspective answers above question in affirmative way with utmost conviction. Whereas another perspective denies its presence with cogency. Personally I have proclivity towards thought that college life is golden period. I can surely say this because of various reasons. Some reasons are togetherness, memories, no responsibilities and just careless life.
college life starts at the age of 16 and ends at approximately 22 years. This age is very enthusiastic, vulnerable as well as creative. At this age we spend most of our time with friends away from family. after finishing school, I joined college. many friends, who took care of me when I was sick, are still my best friend. I didn’t knew that I can have different family with my friend that share care and love.
I can define my college life as learing through fun. Teasing your professor to bunking lectures and failing in few subject to achieving distinction, sports to cultural activities, tours to exhibitions are just memorable events. Out of this, I got first prize in science exhibition and because of this I obtained lots of appreciation and love from professor as well as friends. this was best time of my career. Once we were on field trip to botanical garden, while having fun I mistakenly broke one pot having rare tree. my trip co-ordinator started yelling at me. I felt ashamed. Likewise those years were filled with many ups and down memories. Sometimes being nostalgic feels good now.
Generally, after college life we get sense of responsibility. while studying we are bit careless and because of this we take not only hard but also risky decision. Furthermore such situation teach us the value of being in moments. On my last year of degree I became serious and left all activities except study. one day my counselor called me and told me the importance of being in moment. And he also taught me to keep the balance in all activities.
last but not the least, after this holistic analysis I can say that from college life I learned lot for example how to take care, how to be responsible and how to have fun. because of these reasons it was marvelous as well as enchanted days of my life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, likewise, so, still, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88693467337 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77591346465 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582914572864 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5281422099 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.8333333333 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2666666667 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.56666666667 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214875121652 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555382178535 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864433619084 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120906120699 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530692502599 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.19 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.