there have been many technological developments in the 20th century, for example in transport, telecommunications and health.
what technological development do you think has been the most important? how has it changed people's lives? have all the changes been positive?
give reasons to your answer.
In the past few decades, many technical improvemens have been taken place in the field of transportation, communication, medical sector and in construction section. I believe, development in transport made the entire nations interconnected and have been beneficial to people in many ways.
To began with, road transportation has been play an essential role in human beings for last decades of 20th century. there are many forms of traffic like buses,trucks, taxes, trains,planes etc. First of all, buses are very cheap and reliable source for an individual to go anywhere in the city or state.The regular consumer can take the benefit of discounts on the rent of buses by creating a pass. Other than that, goods carriers are contributing a huge part in progress of nation because these commercial freight vehicles can distribute high weighted stock at any destination in the country. The huge invention that is praise by all folks is Airplanes. Individuals can go anywhere in the world by using them in few hours. It is the most fastest way of transportation. In present time, every middle class people have ability to buy personal vehicle. This facility is very beneficial for a common man to reach on desired destination on desired time.
In addition, every rose has thorns with it. Due to busy road traffic many are happening. These missionary spread pollution, those effects badly on environment and helping in inviting the breath diseases. The under age children try to drive the cars of their elder members and they insistently do the misuse of vehicles. In results,the minor or huge accidents are happening.
To sum up, though there are disadvantages due to technological development but the benefits are always overwheighing them. Hence, the awareness and education must be necessary to use these technical facilities. It will be better to follow the instructions of transportation or any other techniques. So that, people will survive from false and inappropriate results.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, so, in addition, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.240625 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10650621428 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6375 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7168185682 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.85 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214795492314 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504245421321 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651204375079 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119814142659 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813920717176 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.