Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale whereas some believe they should be solved nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Pollution has exacerbated in the past decade. Toxic fumes and particulate matter have occupied our breathing space. Plastic has clogged our water bodies. These pollutants pose a serious treat to our heath and our resources. In my opinion, this issue should be tacked at all levels, internationally, nationally, and individually.
The role played by developing countries and under-developed countries is crucial in curbing pollution. These countries in their quest to become a Superpower have exploited natural resources the most. To assist them in using these resources judiciously, the developed countries can produce environmentally friendly technologies. Furthermore, deciding on environmental goals by all nations is important such as reducing carbon emissions, utilising renewable energy sources and hazardous waste management. Various summits can be held to discuss the problems and provide solutions regarding the environment. For instance, the Kyoto Protocol and Paris agreement. This is how the issue can be addressed globally.
Within a nation, the politicians and the media can effectively spread awareness regarding environmental problems. Several initiatives can be taken to meet international environmental goals. Use of green technology in various sectors can limit the growth of pollution. Industries and companies should be continuously monitored for their toxicity levels. Stringent laws and fines should be imposed on individuals and companies that do not adhere to environmental guidelines.
Individually we can be conscious of our actions that harm the environment. Small habits such as switching off the fans and light after leaving a room, not using excess of water, throwing waste in the dustbins only as well segregating it according to dry and wet waste can be adopted. As residents of Earth, it is our duty to ensure we keep the planet clean.
In conclusion, the environmental problems plaguing our planet can be solved only if everyone takes a firm stand and contributes equally.
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| 2019-09-30 | Priya Joshi | 89 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, regarding, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70297029703 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25982737712 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620462046205 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2444182989 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2857142857 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4285714286 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47619047619 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186448906076 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545486573975 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631757818916 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108835698984 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402336168196 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.