Some people think it is a waste of money to establish libraries since the public can use the Internet at home to obtain information, do you agree or disagree?
In the past few decades, the pace of changes in the development of science and technology is beyond our imagination, and our reading habit has been transferred along with it. With an increasing number of people reading through Internet, some claim that libraries are out of date. In my opinion, there is no need for government spending money on libraries under current situation.
Building public libraries is a waste of tax payers' money. One of the convincing argument is that there are many alternative ways people can acquire information other than reading a library books. For instance, thanks...
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One of the convincing argument is that
One of the convincing arguments is that
Sentence: Some people may argue that public libraries are good places for young students to used due to the fact that libraries have no TVs or computers which can distract students from their study.
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