You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
say how your work could be done while you are away
ask for his/her help in arranging it
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Jason,
I am writing to let you know about my interest in working from the Company's head office in the UK for a short period. As you know, I always wanted to have international work exposure, therefore, a short-term transfer to headquarters would help me meet this goal and at this time, when the majority of company’s business is being transitioned to the India office, training on those upcoming assignments from head office employees, who already have expertise, would benefit both me and our team.
I understand that this deputation should not hamper my ongoing work assignment in the India office and for taking care of this I have all the setup in my laptop, which will allow me to work remotely from the UK so that deliverables are not affected. Additionally, our team is now cross-trained and can help in the hours when I am not available.
This short-term transfer program plan would not be successful without your support and I request you to please check with the higher management about the possibility of arrangement of this transfer opportunity on my behalf. I would set up a meeting with you next week, to discuss this in detail.
With Regards,
Harinder
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jason, I am writing to let you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9801980198 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91311711881 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60396039604 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.209617523 44.8134815571 255% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 143.714285714 76.5299724578 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8571428571 16.8248392259 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214650875412 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900115459788 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741942964624 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141048222788 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634325714237 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 8.37731958763 197% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 70.7449484536 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.