The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show how much a UK school spent on different costs in three separate years – 1981, 1991 and 2001.

According to all years, it can be blatantly seen that, expenditure on teachers’ salaries has the greatest percentages; starting from 40% in 1981 it increases by 5 % in 1991 and drops 45% in 2001. Expenditure on other workers’ salaries had the second highest percentages during 1981 and 1991 (28 and 22% respectively) which decreased significantly to 15 % in 2001.

Although, spending on resources such as books and fur nature and equipment had the identical patterns in 1981 (15%)...

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