Dear Mr. Malhotra,
I, Divyasree, am writing this letter to thank you from the bottom of my heart as we had an extraordinary birthday party held at Hotel Taj, Hyderabad on 18th September 2019.
In detail, I organized a wonderful evening party for my grandmother’s 90th birthday, on the 18th. You suggested the plan of welcoming her to the reception area with colourful roses and orchids, which was an extremely brilliant idea. Over 180 guests attended this party; who were my relatives and family friends.
Indeed, it was a great event because of the flowers and balloons decoration inside the banquet hall and, a plethora of food cuisines which were remarkable that night. Moreover, as there were almost half of the elderly people’s attendance, you maintained the quality of the food as per their requirements, neither too spicy nor too bland. This made me feel ecstatic as every one of them enjoyed the meals.
I could not miss thanking Ms. Naurin, who was the head waitress, who, not only looked after the senior people's needs in serving the food but also helped the younger ones for which our family members were satisfied.
All-in-all, I and my guests enjoyed a lot at your hotel. I hope our relationship continues further.
Yours sincerely,
Divyasree Reddy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06103286385 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81380894414 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.713615023474 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6150405594 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269525386983 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826748311258 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780735456486 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128714347498 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720327426639 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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