The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields by instilling them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
In the given statement the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are not so reasonable. But if the given flaws answered three major question about their prospective then it will be more reasonable.
Firstly, Did they take review from mass public for their movies? Mass public review are most important for a production company whether they like the movie of this type or not. A type of reviewer always thinking from their perspective but not as like a the common mass people. So review from mass public about super screen produced movies should be taken with proper management.
Secondly, Are they take proper initiatives for make it common by the public by advertisement? Advertising of a products either it's a movies or daily need advertising the one of the major issue. If they take proper advertisement their movies and the movie casting members then it would be a different things. Public are known for their product and willing to watch the new Super Screen movies.
Last but not the least, Are movie casting members and type of content familiar to the mass public? If you want to makes a good profit or earns a good recommendation over a thing you should have take a steps to make it familiar to the mass public. Because mass public always aware of their common content and common things that they are like most and they are want to watch from their favorite persons.
So it can be easily say that lack of proper management of their marketing sector in advertisement and not taking any review from their mass public are one of the main reasons for their disappointment over a Supe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: a; the
... from their perspective but not as like a the common mass people. So review from mass...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d be taken with proper management. Secondly, Are they take proper initiativ...
^^
Line 9, column 112, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a product' or simply 'products'?
Suggestion: a product; products
...public by advertisement? Advertising of a products either its a movies or daily need adver...
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Line 9, column 130, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ement? Advertising of a products either its a movies or daily need advertising the ...
^^^
Line 9, column 134, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a movie' or simply 'movies'?
Suggestion: a movie; movies
...t? Advertising of a products either its a movies or daily need advertising the one of th...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 303, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
...ng members then it would be a different things. Public are known for their product and...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...watch the new Super Screen movies. Last but not the least, Are movie castin...
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Line 13, column 117, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'make'.
Suggestion: make
...liar to the mass public? If you want to makes a good profit or earns a good recommend...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 197, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...mmendation over a thing you should have take a steps to make it familiar to the mass...
^^^^
Line 13, column 202, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a step' or simply 'steps'?
Suggestion: a step; steps
...ation over a thing you should have take a steps to make it familiar to the mass public....
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 2235.4752809 60% => OK
No of words: 281.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77580071174 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5769744577 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 215.323595506 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462633451957 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 704.065955056 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8305665666 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.8571428571 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0493840955402 0.243740707755 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0251278910963 0.0831039109588 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310038567532 0.0758088955206 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0308220676663 0.150359130593 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267477081754 0.0667264976115 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 100.480337079 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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