A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
To build up a successful nation its very important to provide proper education to their people.From this this point of view each and every nation should follow a good national study curriculum to become a nation of highly praised.
Similarly,if a nation contains different study curriculum in different state or different area its results among students on higher education are also different.Because a nation have both urban and rural areas where the living facilities of people are also different.If a nation provide good education system only for the rich or middle-class people in urban areas apart from rural areas, than the people of rural are suffered from proper education and utilization. If a nation do so than it will be full waste of their myriad of merits students or knowledge.It was very clearly seen before that most of the famous person or scientist or philosopher are came from a rural environment and become very successful through their hardship.
Moreover,to compete with the developing world with knowledge invention and many other things every nation should prepared their manpower with a strong alacrity to educate them well.If they do so their prosperity in every sector of nation will enlighten.And proper utilization of it are only possible if there is no difference in their study national curriculum system.
On the other hand,its very arduous task to provide same education system to all at a time with a basic national curriculum because various problems among the education system.So its very difficult to make a same national study curriculum for all areas of a nation something like remote areas where electricity are not going yet then how can we use a Powerpoint projector or laptop or digital devices.
In the conclusion, it may be say that a nation if provide a basic same national study curriculum for all of its students its make more and more advantageous things in this developing world but its only possible when a nation provide same facilities for all of its students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, then, well, apart from, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 332.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1265060241 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83959954774 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478915662651 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 23.0359550562 239% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.3654937942 60.3974514979 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 283.666666667 118.986275619 238% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.3333333333 23.4991977007 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.3333333333 5.21951772744 275% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398827475456 0.243740707755 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.231506048987 0.0831039109588 279% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979240481265 0.0758088955206 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262932503571 0.150359130593 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782385992447 0.0667264976115 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.4 14.1392134831 215% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.19 48.8420337079 15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 12.1743820225 213% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.8971910112 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 11.2143820225 214% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.7820224719 255% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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