Dear Hotel Manager,
My name is John employed in a Multinational Organisation as a Software Engineer. Last week, to attend the annual conference in Melbourne my organisation organised one-night accommodation in your hotel for my stay. However, the purpose of this letter to express my dissatisfaction against the air conditioner installed in the hotel room# 13.
Initially, the air conditioner was not cooling the room properly, led to an uncomfortable stay and sleep. Consequently, informed receptionist about the cooling problem to find a rapid solution. Alternately, asked for the replacement of the room. Uncertainly all the rooms were occupied by the guests. At last, opened windows to overcome the problem and the temperature, which was completely disturbing.
Furthermore, please compensate for the full refund as an apology. In addition to this, inspect all the rooms weekly to ensure air conditioners are cooling.
I look forward to hearing from you concerning the refund.
Yours Faithfully,
John Moses
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Hotel Manager, My name is John employed in a Multinatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 32.9175257732 30% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58333333333 4.54256449028 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3153546214 2.54303337028 130% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685897435897 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6208897469 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5833333333 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156684999498 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048109523296 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401939920014 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831989697968 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513007661439 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 70.7449484536 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.2 8.71597938144 163% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 7.59969072165 130% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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