You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
- thank your friend for the holiday
- explain that you left your wallet in their house
- give them instructions on how to send it back to you
Dear Shipra,
I hope this letter finds you well. I have landed in Delhi safely. Thank you so much having me at your place for the holidays. All the places that you took me to were breathtaking and how can I forget about the food that you especially cooked for me? I am already missing the taste! It was a wonderful experience with you.
I had a great time with you guys. When I get here, I realized that I forgot my wallet at your dining table. I was in so much of hurry that I forgot to pick it up. Thank God, I did not keep my passport in it otherwise, I would be stucked!
Could you please courier it to my office address as I am spending most of my time there nowadays due to the new project work? My wallet has some important IDs of mine.
Thank you again for inviting me at your house. You are an amazing host!
Say hello to all.
Take care.
Warm regards,
Kanchan
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| 2019-10-02 | Kanchan Sagar | 56 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 734.0 1615.20841683 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 172.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26744186047 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19129750342 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651162790698 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 506.74238477 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4913525963 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.4615384615 106.682146367 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.2307692308 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.615384615385 7.06120827912 9% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34839066839 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11216048216 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924306568952 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219241796741 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999583086359 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 13.0946893788 40% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 50.2224549098 167% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 11.3001002004 42% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.6 12.4159519038 53% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 78.4519038076 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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