In order to improve a country’s education system, young
students should be allowed to openly criticize their teachers
during class time. Do you agree with this? What are some other
ways education systems could be improved?
It is always a debatable topic whether students should be allowed to criticize their teachers openly or not. Some people feel that there is no harm to comment. However, I believe that pupils should respect their teachers and should not be allowed to criticize them during the lecture. This essay will support my point of view and will also suggest some techniques in order to improve the education system.
First and foremost, in every country teachers are in a respectful position due to their role in making the country's future bright. If students got the legal permission to comment on their teachers then they will not understand the importance of their teachers in the development of their lives and will not respect their mentors. For instance, last year in Delhi public school of India, one teacher got beaten by some students after he scolds them for behaving inadequately. Thus, teachers should not be criticized by their students.
However, there are some methodologies which would be helpful to upgrade the standard of education. Firstly, education should not become a boring activity for youngsters instead; it should be fun learning for them. To achieve this, schools and colleges should hire rightful as well as highly educated teachers with innovative mind-set. Secondly, teachers should make use of technology appropriately to illustrate and elaborate content. For example, there is a school namely "3Idiots school" in Leh, India where students are being taught subjects in an innovative manner and they get a chance to brainstorm on various ideas to make research on the subject they have the most interest in.
In conclusion, due to the respectful image of teachers among society and their importance in developing countries, I believe that under no circumstances students should allow to condemn their teachers. Instead, to make the education system better, the government should appoint great quality of teachers and make education interesting for adolescent children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an innovative manner" with adverb for "innovative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...here students are being taught subjects in an innovative manner and they get a chance to brainstorm on ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34384858044 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78579439648 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567823343849 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8967127733 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.933333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286428659518 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107635562631 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641952910661 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193049648585 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853842706763 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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