Several studies depict that people's personality type highly depends on the traits they get at birth and relies less on the incidents happen in life. I disagree with this statement and believe that life experiences play a bigger role in the establishment of personal characteristics.
On the one side, inherited traits certainly influence the type of personality. It is a scientifically proven fact the genes transmit the information from a generation to another and they do play a role in shaping the appearance and personality of the child. For instance, a child born of white parents would more likely be white. Similarly, people with aggressive or emotional parents get this tendency to be the same way and that is natural.
On the other side, however, life experience plays a bigger role in molding a person's behavioral overlook. Many naturally introvert people become the best public speakers, because of the extensive practice they put towards achieving the goal. Likewise, all the people in military services more likely to act identically due to the repetitive routine and training, no matter what is their background and how much they differ in personalities. The amount of discipline they practice makes them follow the same routine even after retirement. Furthermore, having certain traits by birth does not guarantee something in the future. For example, a child of a successful doctor would only become a doctor, if he studies hard and performs in the desired way.
In conclusion, although people get certain traits from their parents because of genetics, however, the incidents and experiences of life play a substantial role in personality development.
- Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However,other people think that zoos are useful to protect the rare animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 78
- These days many young people leave school with negative attitude towards learning. Why is this happening? What can be done to help young people to leave school with more positive attitude towards learning. 78
- Many people think that important things in life are mostly free or can’t be bought. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience. 67
- A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons 89
- Many people think that important things in life are mostly free or can’t be bought. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...perience plays a bigger role in molding a persons behavioral overlook. Many naturally int...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, likewise, look, similarly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28838951311 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00195618586 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580524344569 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9296719023 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.615384615 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130650076268 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471879687632 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311553427711 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828528363136 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222722938354 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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