Write a letter to the mayor, the head of a municipal government, complaining about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing a dangerous situation.
Dear Sir,
I am a citizen of Dhaka city corporation of your municipal for last 15 years. I am writing this letter to complaining you about a situation which is very dangerous.
I am md. shaimoon hossain, living in the north suburb near dhanmondi park of your municipal. Some adolescents play in the park with their pet dogs. dogs are running around the park furiously and try to catch anything in front of them. Older people with mobility problem and small children also play there.
last monday, a small kids aged 5-6 freaking out loudly and run down on the ground because one dog in running behind him. there are also other incident like the same happened daily. The children who carry these dogs can't have any control to them. so everybody who use the are in fear and dangerous situation.
I think your corporation give a strict rule and bend these dogs for the park.
I hope you understand the situation and take appropriate action as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
shaimoon
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am a citizen of Dhaka city corporation...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ituation which is very dangerous. I am md. shaimoon hossain, living in the ...
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Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Dogs
...s play in the park with their pet dogs. dogs are running around the park furiously a...
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Line 7, column 242, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Older) must be used with a third-person verb: 'peoples'.
Suggestion: peoples
... catch anything in front of them. Older people with mobility problem and small childre...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Last
...nd small children also play there. last monday, a small kids aged 5-6 freaking ...
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Line 11, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... because one dog in running behind him. there are also other incident like the same h...
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Line 11, column 122, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: there are other; there are also
... because one dog in running behind him. there are also other incident like the same happened daily. ...
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Line 11, column 216, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...aily. The children who carry these dogs cant have any control to them. so everybody ...
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Line 11, column 247, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ese dogs cant have any control to them. so everybody who use the are in fear and d...
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Line 11, column 268, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...y control to them. so everybody who use the are in fear and dangerous situation. I t...
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Line 19, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oon as possible. Yours faithfully, shaimoon
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Line 23, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Yours faithfully, shaimoon
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84971098266 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48333010234 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682080924855 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1935496032 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.9285714286 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3571428571 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.21428571429 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206186130514 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571256758338 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698528364123 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929770775316 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572336969096 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.96 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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