31/10/2017
You have decided to leave your current job and look for a new one.
Write a letter to a friend. In your letter
• explain why you want to leave your current job
• what kind of job you are looking for
• ask for some help or advice
Dear Jack.
I hope you're doing well.
I'd like to notify you that I've decided to leave my current job, because I totally fed up with conservative views of my boss. I told him many times we must to change our strategy of handling with clients. we should to orient the business on their needs. But he didn't listen to me and now the company is about to fall. I see no point to stay there any longer working with the man who can't deal with fresh ideas which could make his trades are growing.
So last two weeks I was devoted to job seeking. I'd like to try myself in project management and construction spheres. I've even visited couple of interviews with huge holdings representatives. First is manufacturer of pharmacy production and the second - building organisation. Both have quite good working conditions and high wage.
I know you tend to deal with business sphere as you're a journalist. Can you tell your point of view regarding these companies. It would help me to make a right decision.
Best regards, see you soon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jack. I hope youre doing well. Id like ...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Jack. I hope youre doing well. Id like to notify yo...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...k. I hope youre doing well. Id like to notify you that Ive decided t...
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Line 9, column 3, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
... I hope youre doing well. Id like to notify you that Ive decided to ...
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Line 9, column 30, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...well. Id like to notify you that Ive decided to leave my current job, becaus...
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Line 9, column 153, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...ws of my boss. I told him many times we must to change our strategy of handling with cl...
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Line 9, column 207, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... our strategy of handling with clients. we should to orient the business on their ...
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Line 9, column 263, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ent the business on their needs. But he didnt listen to me and now the company is abo...
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Line 9, column 385, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ere any longer working with the man who cant deal with fresh ideas which could make ...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...could make his trades are growing. So last two weeks I was devoted to job s...
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Line 13, column 52, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...two weeks I was devoted to job seeking. Id like to try myself in project managemen...
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Line 13, column 122, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...ct management and construction spheres. Ive even visited couple of interviews with ...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... working conditions and high wage. I know you tend to deal with business sp...
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Line 17, column 52, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...ou tend to deal with business sphere as youre a journalist. Can you tell your point o...
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Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... help me to make a right decision. Best regards, see you soon.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, second, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74316939891 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60842389889 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.743169398907 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5733273508 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.8666666667 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86666666667 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153795733055 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424316416938 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529367376301 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867665936686 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379366212947 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.32 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.