Dear James,
I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing to you to express my dissatisfaction with my present job. Indeed, I have make up mind to give resignation by the end of this month. Although, it has been six years since I am associated with this company and not to mention it has aided my experience but the salary is quite less as compared to the other institutions.
As you are aware of the fact that I am the sole bread winner in the family of six members so, It is extremely difficult to even meet the basic requirements of all of them with such small wages. Hence, I am desperately searching for a job of higher emolument through which I can satisfy the needs of my family.
Since, you are working in the Recruitment department of a popular organisation, I thought you would be the best person to ask for support. Thus, it would be great if you can give me some suggestions on how to improve my job profile and also tell me few companies where it would be appropriate to apply. Your vast experience can help me a lot to get a perfect job.
Awaiting your prompt reply.
See you soon,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...experience but the salary is quite less as compared to the other institutions. ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38571428571 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66585446815 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0158964437 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7272727273 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211934114237 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811263682383 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476330275311 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115478810001 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395096232278 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.