As, It is assured, “Reflection has somewhat affect on our psyches” so nowadays It is the main concern for the society as well to the government, because the media gives birth to the so many predicaments which has become of utter importance to tackle it in the bud so we can avert the possibility of unknown circumstances. It has a range of positive and negative consequences so one should be aware of that in advance. As, I opine that it depends upon the interest of an individual, how that one takes?
There is no doubt, this has so many bad effects of it, like - fake advertising can ruin someone’s life in so many ways: career, mental thinking, negativity, education, indulging misconduct, offence, reputation etc.; however, it has several benefits which can not be denied. To begin, without the influence of media, one can not be known what is happening around the globe. For instance, the NEWS running on the many channels, paper media – newspaper, magazines, India today does the coverage of every field which sustains on the Universe.
Secondly, digital media plays an important role these days, as it has emerged out as an entertaining medium to all age groups. Youth, children, aged, and old people can use electronic media according to their taste of life. Such as YouTube app has all sorts of videos which can enhance personal knowledge, understanding, and entertain them. Finally, I would say it is one of the ways through which anyone can express one's opinion about the rising problems of the world and it’s a solution too.
To conclude it, I’ll say media has both favourable and adverse effects, regardless of whether it proceeds us in the right or wrong direction, yet it is being advised and observed, before taking any decision in life one should have the help of elders or experienced class of the community.
- School teaching should focus on the success of the workforce and less importance should be given to academic acheivement.To what extent do you agree? 78
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement? 84
- Some people think that news and media are affecting our life in a positive way while others disagree. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'affected'.
Suggestion: affected
... assured, 'Reflection has somewhat affect on our psyches' so nowadays It is ...
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Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... assured, 'Reflection has somewhat affect on our psyches' so nowadays It is the...
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Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ciety as well to the government, because the media gives birth to the so many pre...
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Line 5, column 418, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...e ways through which anyone can express ones opinion about the rising problems of th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93630573248 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88189280204 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630573248408 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.2578299237 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.909090909 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5454545455 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0952466426273 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366688224022 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026332737136 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0549682036515 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135901333511 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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