learning language by staying better that other BR Model 6
is it prudent to say that learning language in the counrty having its origin is not good ? Two diverse perspective emerges while meticulously evaluating this issue. one perspcetive answers aforementioned question in affirmative with utmost conviction whereas other denies its presence.
First option is to learn by staying in own country proves benificial. staying in different country to learn new language is not an option for people not copable of going their for only this purpose. Many multinational companies require candidates knowing and speaking different languages. tutions are available and by continous practicing we can learn new language. Furthermore, one survey stated that english grammer of indians is better than Americans. english language is not native to India but tutions and school system taught them by using rules so grammer of indians is perfect.
people, learning language by staying or learing by contact of native speakers, are unaware of grammer and basic rules of language. Generally language differes when we speak and write so we do not get much about language. Certenly learning by this process will give you good accent of language. this will not be felt odd to ears as well as this will help to communicate easily with native speakers. one reserch study said that, we learn faster when we are living in that environment. The time required to learn new language will be reduced and we can get mastery on that language soon.
Personally, I have proclivity towards the thought that it is better to lean new language In the same country where language is spoken. we know that today we have lots of things to do with less time. time costs money therefore it must be saved. There is no need to learn about grammer because we are not supposed to gain detail knowledge to survive in other country. knowledge enough to communicate well will be enough. Few years back I wanted to learn Polish language. Paying tution fees was nearly immposible. when I reached German, with the help of my collegue withing month I learned enough to thrive their.
After this holistic analysis we can see that all points are in favor of second thought of school. so it is good to know everything about new language but knowing enough to speak is sufficient. According to me learning by staying in the counrty where language is spoken is better option.
- Rambrandt painting 80
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- It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 70
- Leaders like John F. Kennedy and Martin Luther King have made important contributions to the people of the United States. Name another world leader you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice. 70
- At some schools some lessons for young students ages5 8 include video games as a way to increase the students interest in learning Some people believe this a very effective way for young students to learn others believe it is too distracting and 64
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... knowledge to survive in other country. knowledge enough to communicate well will be enou...
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...nough. Few years back I wanted to learn Polish language. Paying tution fees was nearly...
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... I learned enough to thrive their. After this holistic analysis we can see that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00505050505 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62480116937 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7066299417 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.2307692308 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27287159596 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773154993087 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778885009546 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163398429033 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029428845896 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.