Democracy is a long word that is not applied in the real sense in today's world. Do u agree or disagree ?
By definition of democracy, it is government run by people for people. According to me it is not only long word but I am sure that is applied in real sense in today’s world and I am totally agree with this because of many reasons. Some of them are averred below. If we have good government, who thinks about every corner of community then and then only a democracy gets well applied
Firstly, best example of democracy is India. From last 75 years people from that country are running government successfully. Since independence many changes in constitution have been made in order to maintain peace. These changes were done by considering wishes and requirements. Chane in legislation like Lokpal bill to avoid corruption is best example of democracy. Many bills like Krushi bills were brought for farmers.
Secondly from the incidents like government change in India, we can clearly see that people prefer different governments. In many region single party rules for decades but suddenly government changes occurs. According to me this can be done in the countries where democracy is well established. By right to vote people think and decide who will be taking decisions for them. Incidents,where only one family is ruling for generations, are black spots on democracy. In case of democracy it matters lot about who is on government. People like Dr A.P. J. Abdul Kalam in the higher position can think about all the points in government and bring all the changes.
For Indians it is not only long word it has sacrifice and tears of their loved once. I also have struggle of 150 years to get freedom. After all these struggles they know value of democracy and they respect it. So it is well established and in real sense applied for the people.
Although after large demand there is no firm law to stop rapist and terrorist. Community had asked for it time to time. In this matter democracy is not applied in real sense. Many changes are still in progress, but this does not mean that in all the aspects it is not established very well.
In the end, after discussing both the sides it can be clearly seen that, every coin has two sides. Both the sides of coin make it useful. In case of democracy where we think that it is not as good then for me its chance to improve democracy itself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 403.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71712158809 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5916281842 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518610421836 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.38483146067 296% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5669449894 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.8928571429 118.986275619 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.3928571429 23.4991977007 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.89285714286 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182147168157 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437825190739 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084968086103 0.0758088955206 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104828392559 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929197040769 0.0667264976115 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 14.1392134831 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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