Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60, it could cause
problems. Do you agree or disagree?
working of the elder after the age of 60 is an arguable issue in societies. some people believe that employing this age bracket brings about problems in communities. I totally agree with this assert based on the following reasons. Firstly, recruiting 60-years employees can give rise to the increase of juvenile delinquency in communities. In another world, if business owners occupy the employees after the retirement age, it might lead to a decline in the number of job opportunities for the youth, thereby the young generation show tendency to do unlawful activities; hence, the number of teenage delinquents rise significantly in this situation. some sociologists, for instance, assert that there is a positive correlation between the rate of youth unemployment and crime rate and to reduce this rate government not only should curb working of older person but decrease retirement age to 50 years, this, in turn, create an array of job opportunities for the youngers. Secondly, the dearth of creative and new ideas in the workplace, on the grounds that older staff with more than 60 years old instead of the youth occupy positions. aged workforces often have the traditional mindset and withstand radical changes and accept easily new ideas neither in their workplace nor in methods of the doing job. having innovative attitudes in firms and organizations in order to maintain market share and survive rest on utilizing young jobholders with their ingenious mind rather than those who have more than 60 years with the uncreative approach. In conclusion, it is my utter conviction that hiring individuals who are more than 60 years old would cause difficulties at the community level and business level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19565217391 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87390564361 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61231884058 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.9648225145 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.4 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180721085977 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766771431091 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699682806645 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180721085977 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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