Something in an airport delayed you and you have missed your flight. Write a letter to the airport’s customer service department. In your letter include:
What delayed you
How missing this flight affected you
What you would like the airport to do about this issue
Dear Sir or Madam
My name is Behnaz Yousefi. I am writing to you regarding the issue I had last weekend. I had a flight to Isfahan departing at 12 o'clock. However duo to some incidents at the airport, I could not get on board on time. First of all, the information on the ticket about the gate number was wrong. I spent half an hour on a line that did not belong to my flight. Second of all, the employees were not helpful at all while I was trying to figure out where I am supposed to go.
I lost my presentation at a meticulously well-known conference. There would be no certificate provided to be as I did not attend the conference. This event could have had a huge impact on my résumé if I had made there on time.
I would like you to take necessary precautionary measures to prevent others from experiencing the same misfortune. I think you should double check important data on the tickets. In addition, teaching your staff how to value passenger's time and helping them to navigate their way through the airport would be beneficial.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam My name is Behnaz Yousefi. I am writing ...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...had a flight to Isfahan departing at 12 oclock. However duo to some incidents at the a...
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Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ight to Isfahan departing at 12 oclock. However duo to some incidents at the airport, I...
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Line 13, column 321, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hrough the airport would be beneficial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, regarding, second, so, well, while, i think, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52083333333 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7504685128 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.447447053 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.7692307692 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7692307692 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17296043004 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518632495811 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381875295752 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107045218975 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502182714729 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.