There will be a traditional celebration in your country and you want to invite your
friend from an English-speaking country. Write him/her a letter and - invite your
friend,
- explain what happens at the party,
- describe the tradition and why it’s important in your country,
- say why it is important for your friend to be there
Dear Cinderella,
Hope you are doing well. How is the weather out there? I’m doing a great job here. I’m
writing this letter to invite you for the Diwali celebration that is happening on 2 nd November,
2019 in our country.
Diwali is a festival of lights and it is celebrated across my country for a week where people
get together and burst crackers, distribute sweet, provide servings to gods in the temple. It
is one of an important celebration in our country as it has some significance with the past.
Since the celebration is all about togetherness and sharing love, I’m inviting all our common
friends so that, we can make this celebration more delightful and memorable. Also, I know
that you are fond of deserts that are available in our country. Hence, through this trip you
can visit all the places in India as well as taste all types of delicacies.
You need not worry about the tickets and travel to India as I have enrolled with an event
management company who will take care all things. All you have to do is just pack your
bags.
Please write back to me the date on which you are planning to visit India. Looking forward
for a response as soon as possible.
Best regards,
Haritha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Get
...ss my country for a week where people get together and burst crackers, distribute...
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Suggestion: Is
...de servings to gods in the temple. It is one of an important celebration in our ...
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Suggestion: Friends
...ove, I'm inviting all our common friends so that, we can make this celebration m...
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Suggestion: That
...elightful and memorable. Also, I know that you are fond of deserts that are availa...
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Suggestion: Can
...country. Hence, through this trip you can visit all the places in India as well a...
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Suggestion: Management
...ndia as I have enrolled with an event management company who will take care all things. ...
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Suggestion: Bags
... All you have to do is just pack your bags. Please write back to me the date on ...
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Suggestion: For
...nning to visit India. Looking forward for a response as soon as possible. Best ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80555555556 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53946474141 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6451831236 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1428571429 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4285714286 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.29896907216 326% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178852573606 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568647855354 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592559085542 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0603688229417 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536292863284 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.