The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.

Essay topics:

The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.

The line graph illustrates the number of people traveled to and from the UK in the period of 20 years from 1979 to 1999. The bar graph shows the most popular nations which UK residents liked to visit in 1999.

In general, it is evident that the number of people traveled to and from the UK increased from 1979 to 1999. Interestingly, France was the best country for UK people to visit in 1999.

As can be seen on the line chart, with about 12 millions at the beginning, the number of UK people visited aboard saw a significant growth and nearly reached a peak at about 53 millions in the year 1999. Meanwhile, the level of overseas residents who visited to the UK rose gradually from 10 to nearly 30 million at the end of the period.

In addition, France was considered the most countries visited by UK residents at about 11 millions in 1999 whereas the opposite was true for Turkey and Greece just at around 2 and 3 million people, respectively. The number of UK people traveled Spain stood at about 9 million which nearly doubled that of in USA at 4 millions in that year.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 341, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t of in USA at 4 millions in that year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, while, in addition, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4472361809 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4873610465 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48743718593 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6529741817 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.625 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377499117844 0.215688989381 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194327141897 0.103423049105 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319804491944 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253138247805 0.15604864568 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175480641443 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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