Dear jack,
I hope this letter finds you in good health. Actually, i'm writing to let you know unfortunately i won't be able to come along for going to the cinema tonight. I know someone who can fill my absence even better than me.
In terms of the reason that prevent me to come. unwantedly, i have got stuck at my workplace because of bunch of tasks that my boss has given to me. it seems they take up all of my time late at night, so i am not likely to keep up with this plan.
He is one of my university classmates, who i think can make a good relationship with you. Based on my feelings you have a lot of in-commons ,so that you will find a way to hit it off. his name is jafar, and he is at the same age of us. I told him about today and he will show up at the cinema's door at 8:30 p.m if you agree.
I looking forward to hearing your idea about.
cheers,
Davood Alizadeh,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 49, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Unwantedly
... of the reason that prevent me to come. unwantedly, i have got stuck at my workplace becau...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 205, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ake up all of my time late at night, so i am not likely to keep up with this plan...
^
Line 6, column 44, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...is one of my university classmates, who i think can make a good relationship with...
^
Line 6, column 111, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ationship with you. Based on my feelings you have a lot of in-commons ,so that yo...
^^
Line 6, column 141, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y feelings you have a lot of in-commons ,so that you will find a way to hit it of...
^^
Line 6, column 186, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: His
...that you will find a way to hit it off. his name is jafar, and he is at the same ag...
^^^
Line 6, column 288, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cinemas'' or 'cinema's'?
Suggestion: cinemas'; cinema's
... about today and he will show up at the cinemas door at 8:30 p.m if you agree. I loo...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...nemas door at 8:30 p.m if you agree. I looking forward to hearing your idea ab...
^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Cheers
... forward to hearing your idea about. cheers, Davood Alizadeh,
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, look, so, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 715.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.99441340782 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22986921572 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675977653631 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.2724771492 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.5833333333 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9166666667 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208212304153 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692820137663 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632606193842 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117520028445 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826634477933 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.8 8.37731958763 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.27 8.71597938144 60% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.1 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.