Fossil fuels such as coal，oil and natural gas, are used in many countries. Recently,in some countries,the use of alternative energy including wind and solar power has been encouraged，Is this trend a postive or a negative development ?
Recent year, owing to the development of technology, the government of the advanced country have been tried to promote alternate energy, particularly solar and wind power. It seems good advance but there is a positive and negative effect on this issue.
I strongly believe that new energy should not be encouraged at this moment.
On the one hand, alternative energy is an eco-friendly system to reduce environmental pollution.
There is no exhaust gas in the system, especially Co2, No2 and So2, it can maintain air clean enough.
Also, due to relatively high energy transformation rate, a cooling system to handle waste heat is unnecessary which overheat the seawater or river water.
On the other hand, there are two negative effects of using alternative energy.
First, the system can not be independent of the weather condition. Electricity production stops when the cloudy or rainy season, most of the industrial plants and domestic electric appliances are out of work.
Second, still the system is very expensive to construct, plant operators need a subsidy from the government. Also constructing the Wind or solar power need lots of space to buy. In Korea, they do not have enough space to construct, they eliminate mountain. The mountain has lots of trees and its own ecosystem but they do not think that. And this is the main reason why I think alternative energy has negative development.
As has been demonstrated, I understand the favorable effect of alternative energy, but the negative effects I suggested should be solved in advance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 21, column 110, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ors need a subsidy from the government. Also constructing the Wind or solar power ne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, so, still, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2371541502 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90680224459 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612648221344 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3630534174 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175462228894 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057172887536 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537651652135 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0713469203943 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500451386011 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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