The table below gives information on internet use in six categories by age group.
Describe the information in the table and make comparisons where appropriate.
The table gives details of the internet usages activities about seven age groups. And the information shows that teenagers like to use internet to play online games or reading news, while people who age from 20 to 40 tend to research information or buying things.
Most of youngsters like to play online games which 81% of them do so. Followed by it is getting news with internet which the figure is 76%. However, with time goes by, lower number of them play games and when they grows more than 40 years old, the occupation decrease lower than 30%. It seems online games and downloads with internet become less interest toward mid-aged people, since the occupation of these tow continuously decrease.
The figure for product research gain the fastest growth from 0% to 79% for people who are teens to people age 20s. People who age 30s like to purchase things most. And when the age grow toward 20s, about 31% of people like to use internet to search for people which is the highest occupation among all age groups. And reading news by internet is the common activity which always occupy over 70% without age influence.
- The plans below show the information on the first floor of a particular library in1995 and the same area at the present time. Select the main features shown below and give comparison where relevant. 78
- People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities? 61
- The graph below shows the alcohol-related deaths in 7 different countries and the average beer consumption in 2005.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the description of the correlation of the table that follows. 73
- Some children receive almost no encouragement from their parents regarding their performance at school, while other children receive too much pressure from their over enthusiastic parents which can have a negative impact on the child.Why do you think some 56
- Some people think that the range of technology currently available is increasing the gap between rich people and poor people. Others think that it is causing the opposite effect.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the youngsters') or simply say ''Most youngsters''.
Suggestion: Most of the youngsters; Most youngsters
...rch information or buying things. Most of youngsters like to play online games which 81% of ...
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Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'grow'
Suggestion: grow
...number of them play games and when they grows more than 40 years old, the occupation ...
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Line 9, column 83, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...astest growth from 0% to 79% for people who are teens to people age 20s. People who age...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7806122449 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24385411724 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561224489796 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7583524579 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 5.23603664747 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165664930731 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718793430313 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690505173759 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135634767787 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103441411376 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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