Nowadays some people say that children should go to school as young as possible. While others believe that children should go to school when they are at least seven years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays parents become more stressful than in the past when thinking about their kids’ future. Lots of parents wish to put their children into school as early as they could, but ignore whether or not their kids are suitable to school. I believe kids should attend school in their appropriate age.
Admittedly, to let teenagers go to school and start studying early can help them become more knowledgeable than peer, and that is the main reason for why some parents advocate this opinion. Parents believe the kids will become mature and clever if been educated longer and earlier. So that it is possible for kids to become the winner in todays’ competitive world. Moreover, parents also consider that if the kids start education early, they can spend their free time on their interest, since they have already learn what they need in young age.
However, I believe kids should learn what they need during proper age. First and foremost, it is impossible to let children master too difficult knowledge since their brains are not mature enough to understand except they are over 7. This will cause those young kids have to spend more time in learning. And in a long-term some teenagers have a negative attitude toward learning because of a long length of time in boring study. Another reasons is that kids who over 7 can express their thought more clearly than younger one, since they have complete their language learning and not only can they understand teachers’ explanation in knowledge but also they are competent to voice out what they think about.
Overall, to compare two views, I tend to support kids should start their learning experience after 7. Because they have better comprehensive ability and language skill than younger one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 192, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...hool as early as they could, but ignore whether or not their kids are suitable to school. I be...
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Line 5, column 517, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...their interest, since they have already learn what they need in young age. Howev...
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Line 9, column 446, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...f time in boring study. Another reasons is that kids who over 7 can express their ...
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Line 13, column 83, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to experience'
Suggestion: to experience
...upport kids should start their learning experience after 7. Because they have better compr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0409556314 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43262602886 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539249146758 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2499031257 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154183376105 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633183607259 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481824285927 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103302208038 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412381514467 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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