Nowadays more task at home and work me being performed by robots . Why do you think happening is it a positive or negative development
it is true that robots are becoming a improtant part of our life when it helps people deal with houseworks and offices. While I beleive that it bring positive things, I also discuss main reasons why we think about it.
Firstly, we need to save time to do other somethings. By using robots for cleanning our homes, we do not waste of time. Additionally, we have not to pay more money for renting factotum. For example, people only pay $ 34 to buy a cleaning robot instead of paying $ 40 monthly to hire maids. The second reason is that robots are more convenient, they even clean the house cleaner than anyone else. we always want to use robots because they're smart, obedient and most importantly never lie. Imagine what our life would be like if we hired a house cleaner to always lie or steal. Certainly, life will be turned upside down.
The development of robots brings convenience to human life. we have more time to spend with family and friends instead of doing housework. In addition, robots help us feel safe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, so, while, for example, in addition, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 181.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63535911602 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40361388955 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.696132596685 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4724213817 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.5384615385 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9230769231 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15588947921 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584546730842 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026719273314 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11297609276 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165396994598 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.