Some people think that cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others believe it is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion
cultural heritages are cultural specificities of a country. many people argue that cultural traditions can be a money making tools in tourism industry, the others claim that it is only the way we preserve them. In my opinion, I total agree that people should link cultural heritages to tourism but also maintain some methods to protect this precious.
it can be seen clearly that many customers have embarrassing behavior in public places. For example, dumping waste or signing on memorial statues is one of the most common activities in famous historical constructions. these activities cause an unpleasant view or a disgusting smell. some managers just ignore or avoid punishing customers for business purposes. therefore, cultural specificities of historical constructions will be danger. In addition, impulse the development of tourism could put these traditional places in urgent situations about cultural integration, cultural difference, cultural misconception or even race conflict.
On the other hand, promoting cultural traditions is an effectively method to popularize these treasures to the public. By draw the customer’s attention to tourist attractions or ancient monuments, managers of these places can attract more money that will be invested on rebuilding infrastructure, expanding strengths and developing more services in these places. Moreover, in a cyber world today, many young adults spend much time on technology, internet than on conserving historical values. therefore, visiting cultural inheritance will positively effect on how people perceive the important of protecting these values.
To sum up, I believe that preserving national cultures is an effective way to develop economy and ensuring the culture is conserved and handed down between generations, tourism plays a vital but not monopoly role.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77289377289 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13351069751 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6336996337 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3755729689 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.571428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22836239099 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767411107042 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583530436086 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140282999481 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562603980215 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.