Dear John,
I hope you and your parents doing well, I am writing this letter to express my feelings, that I visited the museum in the central city of Telangana about last week.
As you know, We have a Christmas occasion holidays from 20th December to 2nd January 2020. So, I, George and David are planned to visit the Nijam Museum in Telangana. We started our journey on 22nd December by 10:00 A.M. we reached the Hyderabad by 10:00 P.M. We took some rest and went to the Museum. The Museum was the walkable distance from Hotel Taj.
I am very excited to tell you about the Museum, The Museum was started in 2010. Daily 20,000 people are visiting the museum. The Museum shows that the historical information about Hyderabad so many historical things are placed in a beautiful manner with detailed information. And, The Jansi Laxmi Bhai (The great warrior) knife is there and it is the special attraction of that museum. Totally the Museum occupied with the two floors, on the first-floor Nijam ruler's information is there and on the second-floor historical things and historical books are placed on multiple shelves. It is really nice place to visit again.
with love,
Bhanu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a beautiful manner" with adverb for "beautiful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ad so many historical things are placed in a beautiful manner with detailed information. And, The Jan...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
...is really nice place to visit again. with love, Bhanu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, second, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83823529412 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44365080525 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8439072885 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.25 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277021366309 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897431504517 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088350440316 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200957835409 0.12726935374 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807202047486 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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