Nowadays, as the tourism become a popular trend, we find that we are losing some cultural traditions at a great speed. A part of people tend to believe that tourism will be an absolute disaster for cultural traditions, while others hold the opinion that the only way to save them is by attracting more tourists. In my opinion, tourism could be favorable to avoid losing of traditions, however, it is far more than the only way.
On the one hand, a large number of living habits and festivals were changed in order to meet the growing demands of tourists. In some places, local people rebuild and decorate their houses in a trendy way or begin some popular commercial activities, which are the symbol of losing cultural traditions. Furthermore, they changed their traditional ways of cooking to satisfy tourists' tastes and they stop speaking their own languages which are considered out of date. Moreover, some of their traditional festivals are losing their cultural value. Before, local people celebrate their festival once a year, while nowadays they celebrate it three times a day to make sure that tourists will not miss the presentation of festival.
On the other hand, tourism may help to save certain cultural traditions. Since tourists are generally curious about local culture, local people could have the possibilities to earn money by dancing, painting, selling typical handicraft articles and so on. In addition, several historical buildings could be rebuilt or repaired with the aim of catching tourists' eyes and appealing to more people all over the world.
I tend to believe that tourism is not the only way to save cultural traditions. For instance, not only government could promote learning of local culture, but also local people could organize some cultural activities like theater, singing competitions, and expositions.
Overall, tourism may damage cultural traditions to some extent but we can always find a good way to make good use of it. At the same time, some extra efforts could be helpful to preserve the cultural traditions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... than the only way. On the one hand, a large number of living habits and festivals were change...
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Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a trendy way" with adverb for "trendy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...eople rebuild and decorate their houses in a trendy way or begin some popular commercial activi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13946587537 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68112672351 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53412462908 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1876232508 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.466666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317007603693 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114868120422 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662018545192 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178407022784 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582349819481 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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