How food preparation has changed the way we live?
I believe that nowadays preparation of food is easier than before. the methods of food preparation and diversity of foods has changed the life style of the people. The following paragraphs explain and illustrate this matter.
First, today access to a wide range of foods is improved. One can find every kind of food they want in a nearby grocery store and supermarket. The people can buy raw foods or materials/ingredients and prepare themselves in the kitchen or buy cooked and prepared food in the supermarkets and restaurants.
Secondly, nowadays you may find a wide variety of foods around. There are a lot of choices for the people. The people depend on their budget, income, dietary regime and many other reasons, can buy the food they like. Vegetarians, and the people who do not want to spend specific kinds of foods, due to religious reasons, like Indians who do not eat the beef have a choice everywhere.
Third, previously preparing food was time consuming. The people either prepared food for their family through cultivating foods in their lands or buying for other providers which was not accessible as it is now. There was not as many as shops and providers as it is now. So they needed to spend a lot of time to prepare the food. But nowadays they can find in a nearby supermarket or grocery store.
Fourth, due to the development in the technology of agriculture, transportation, processing and other food related technologies and machines, production of foods are easier in a short time with lower price. There are a great number of food providers that can provide in a short time the foods. The development of food related technology and industrialization of agriculture and livestock facilitated production of foods in an industrialized scale. This has had a positive effect on food price. For example, you can find chickens that produced in Brazil in Afghanistan with a very reasonable price. Or McDonalds in everywhere of the world.
Fifth, the food preparation mechanisms nowadays, has changed the life style of the people. Previously the people baked bread at home and prepared the food in their kitchen, but nowadays they can find prepared food everywhere. You cannot find a bakery in any home expect the remote villages in some underdeveloped countries. So the people can spend their time for other businesses.
In conclusion, food preparation has not only is easy, but also has changed the life style of the people. The people in past prepared food in their kitchen at home and baked bread, but now they can buy it prepared in a supermarket. Access to foods are improved, and diversity of foods increase, less time is needed to find proper food with reasonable price and finally the price of foods is reasonable due to open market price.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2329.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 469.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96588486141 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91987896856 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.411513859275 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 724.5 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.8428086742 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1785714286 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265961621036 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948764647522 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862287157134 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177569536229 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707284532097 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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