Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, children are increasingly becoming undisciplined. It is believed by some parents that smacking is the best way to discipline their offsprings. This essay will argue that it is completely unacceptable to use this physical punishment because it negatively impacts a child's mental growth, and it provokes physical violence in society.
To begin with, the use of corporal punishment should be discouraged because it is harmful to boys' and girls' intellectual growth. Since childhood is a highly vulnerable and active phase of life, minors want to try out various activities to experience new things, and their limited knowledge of what is wrong would lead to inappropriate behavior. Researchers point out that If parents beat them at this stage, it lowers their self-esteem to explore, which further causes stress and retards their mental growth. For example, Oxford University recently reported that twenty-five percent of primary school children are suffering from depression in London because of severe forms of corporal punishment such as slapping and kicking.
Another reason why smacking needs to be stopped is that it influences school-aged children to practice aggressive behavior on their classmates. This age has a high tendency to replicate the behavior learned from society, so if they see mature people are using physical force on kids, they would repeat this violent behavior on their weaker peers; and as a consequence, physical bullying like social problems are becoming more common these days. For instance, a survey has been connected by Sunday Times showed that there has been a significant increase in bullying cases in the countries where domestic corporal punishment of children is legal.
To conclude, smacking is a harmful form of punishment and guardians ought not to beat their young children to well-behaved them because it hinders their mental health and encourages them to use violence on others. It is recommended that governments should make this practice illegal and, mothers and fathers should adopt alternative ways to discipline their kids.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54658385093 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06566258794 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583850931677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.8904985049 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.363636364 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2727272727 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0941270664419 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450460051098 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408234817169 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624739282032 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138454125399 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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