Some people think that schools have to be more entertaining, while others think that their sole purpose is to educate.
Which do you agree with?
It is argued that study institutions ought to encourage more enjoyable activities in contrast to just providing academic ken. This essay agrees with that statement because schools’ entertaining activities would help in reducing academic stress as well as encourage the school-goers to pursue their interests as career objectives.
Supporting leisure activities by schools to reduce the stress level in children is an indeed positive development. This is because there has been a continuous surge in the academic competition from the past few decades, owing to this adolescent have to spend extra hours in studies which eventually add a great deal of mental pressure on their minds, however through promoting recreational classes during school-hours can help them to handle excessive psychological pressure, as a result their academic performance will be improved manifolds. For instance, a recent study by British Education Council showed that there was seventy-five percent inclination in grades of pupils in examinations who studied from primary-schools that promote sports and music sessions.
Another reason why extra-curricular activity should be encouraged by educational institutes is the fact that such encouragement would influence teens to turn their individual hobbies as future career prospects. Since this trend would inevitably help in honing the talent of young-generation, therefore it would certainly produce the legends of years to come who will bring glory to their nations by giving phenomenal performances at international platforms. To illustrate, U.K athletes secure an array of medals in Olympic games is due to the fact that sports sessions had been made compulsory in all middle-schools by the British government.
To recapitulate, school authorities should leverage more on non-academic activities compared to covering only school curriculum for relieving anxiety in youngsters associated with academic competition and grooming them for grabbing career opportunities in their areas of interest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in contrast, as a result, as well as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.95608108108 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39931183417 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655405405405 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.6983466207 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 220.375 106.682146367 207% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 37.0 20.7667163134 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13321943342 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543811442737 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348853950833 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859532061396 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221805068781 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.1 13.0946893788 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.0 50.2224549098 34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.88 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.29 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.78957915832 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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